*ahem*
Clearly there's some insperation from .hack/sign here however this doesn't mean much for I PHOENIX WRIGHTER reviewer of epicness! Grant ye pardons for thy transgressions!
*awkward silence*
Well...I tried...
Anyway good stuff, I like what I see, and so far I'm enjoying it (has anyone guessed my favorite character at this point? XD) keep it up. I can't wait to see what you've got in mind for the rest.

lol The eel from SM64 :D